Saturday 8 December 2012

Expanding A short message :)

Question:  Find a message in your inbox. Describe the emotion of the sender (Original sentence). Expand the original sentence to at least 30 words. 


Original message : Are you online? we need one more player to start the game! 


Expanded : Just when he wanted to start, one player has left the game. He took off his headphones and grabbed his phone. He can't think of someone else but me to ask for a game of DOTA. He typed the message hastily because the other players were waiting. He hesitated to send me a message as he don't want to disturb me for doing my work. He wanted to press 'cancel' but he accidentally pressed 'send'. 

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