The causes of motor vehicle accidents are speeding, drunk driving, and the usage of cellphone while driving.
Topic sentence
1. Speeding can cause a horrible motor vehicle accidents
2. Other than that, drunk driving will lead to an accident.
3. Next, another reason why motor vehicle accidents occur is the usage of cellphone while driving.
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ReplyDeleteSome points to ponder:
Thesis and TS 3: 'use' or'usage'?
TS 1: Do you need 'a' for 'accidents'?
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